World Building For The Fantasy Romance
Author: Meagan Hatfield
Narnia. Middle Earth. Atlantis. Camelot.
When you hear the names of these fantasy worlds, your mind swirls with images of the
inhabitants, environments and most of all, how they all fit perfectly within the story.
That is successful world building. When done well, it can place your fantasy novel on
the keeper shelves of readers everywhere.
Fantasy is described by Merriam-Webster’s dictionary as: “imaginative fiction featuring
especially strange settings and grotesque characters.” I have to whole-heartedly
disagree. To me, fantasy is more aptly described as a place where anything is
possible. Unlike other genres, like say science fiction, fantasy does not have set
boundaries or rules. You don’t have to abide by the laws of science, physics or spend
hours pouring over astronomy charts. You can pretty much write anything your mind
conjures.
There could be a magic spell keeping your hero and heroine apart, like in the movie
LADYHAWKE. A small, peace-loving farmer set out on a life-threatening quest to
destroy an evil ring, as in LORD OF THE RINGS. Or perhaps even a little boy who
discovers he’s a wizard and is whisked away to a special school to hone his craft. (I
don’t think I have to name that book.) Each of these fantasy examples took us to
wonderfully exciting new worlds and immersed us in their respective stories. All three
are different, but exceptional examples of how to successfully build a world while
keeping it specific and unique to the storyline and/or characters you’re working with.
Nothing to it, right? Well, it’s certainly do-able.
The first thing you want to consider is what kind of fantasy romance you are writing.
There are four common sub genres found in fantasy romance novels, Epic being the
broadest of them all. With an Epic fantasy, the world you’ve created will be at stake in
a good vs. evil type situation. Both the Heroic and Sword & Sorcery sub-genres evolve
from this. In the Heroic tale, the hero sets out to save the world, thus the story
becomes more about him/her than the actual act of the world being saved. (Think
Frodo in the Lord of the Rings – although, I know it is really Sam’s story.) *grins*
Sword & Sorcery stories are usually set in some ancient setting, and concentrate on
wizardry, swordplay, dragons, etc. (Think King Arthur, Xena, Harry Potter.) Last, the
Historical fantasy will take an actual event, place or person, but add magical or
supernatural elements. (Think Ladyhawke, Beauty and the Beast) Though some may
argue there are more fantasy categories than I listed here, in romance we have a
paranormal genre, which covers things such as werewolves, ghosts, witches, vampires
and so on.
Okay, so you’ve chosen the specific sub-genre for your fantasy. Now it’s time to
create your world. The thing to remember with world building is to keep it simple. This
is where it can get sticky. You don’t want to go overboard and make every element of
your novel strange and overly detailed. This will only jar the reader, making it harder
for them to suspend disbelief and continue reading. Instead, the goal should be to
ensure the world you’ve created feels believable and comfortable. It’s kind of like
wearing three-inch heels for the first time. Sure it’s different, uncomfortable and hard
to maneuver around the room at first. But after a few steps you realize it’s exciting,
you like being taller and your legs look amazing.
One way to do this in your story is to keep certain thoughts, ideas or character
behaviors within it familiar. For example, if you have a centaur warrior as your hero,
give him an obsession for watching old movies, or chocolate chip cookies. It will
humanize him in the readers mind, making him more relatable. Harry Potter may be
learning how to fly a broom or fight a fire-breathing dragon, but he’s doing these
magical, crazy things in a school. A normal, familiar setting we can all relate to. Ideally,
you want even your most bizarre creatures to have some human characteristics
otherwise you risk disinterest from the readers. Perhaps there are demons from the
underworld in your story. Try having them addicted to things like chocolate, sex or air
conditioning. Personally, I thought the aliens in ROSWELL were interesting because
they put Tabasco sauce on everything. *smiles* Now, the pitfall with this modus
operandi is making the world you build too similar to our own. To avoid this, think if it
like cooking. You don’t want to have so much seasoning in the dish that you can’t
recognize the main ingredient. The same goes for world building. The idea is to
pepper the book and/or your characters with common ideas, objects, behaviors, etc.
Flavor is the objective and balance is key.
Another important aspect to remember when creating your world is that once you set
rules, stick to them. Consistency is the key here. If your hero is a merman and the
heroine a human, you have to find a logical and plausible way for them to be intimate.
Maybe on certain moon cycles he can change form. Or maybe they have to be
submerged. If you made them both horses, wolves or cats, pass some of that animal’s
trait onto their human characteristics and don’t forget about it. You don’t want to
mention it once and then “bam” they are normal humans for the rest of the book. If
your heroine is a witch who grows weak whenever she uses her magic, you cannot
have her fight the villain in the end without showing her get tired, or passing out—
unless you show a reason why. As always, you don’t want to “cheat” the rules and
have things “just happen”. Readers are smart. You should know, you’re one of them!
If you cheat them, they’ll put the book down. (Or throw it across the room.)
Names are the last point I’ll touch on. As with any book, use ones that fit the story
time, place, feel and characters. Do not just pick some exotic, hard to pronounce
name because it’s different. I recommend saying the name aloud. If it trips you up,
change it. Also, pay careful attention to the masculine and feminine. You don’t want
the readers guessing a being’s gender any more than you want them stumbling over
their name. And unless you are writing a time-travel fantasy, be careful not to name
one character Xielnain, (which I’d think twice about using anyway) and another
character Steve.
However you, the writer, decide to create and build your fantasy world, remember to
make splash it with a touch of familiar flavors. Although it sounds backwards, keeping
aspects of your fantasy everyday and ordinary, will help make it extraordinary and
hopefully place you on that ideal prize – the keeper shelf.
Meagan :-)
©2006Meagan Hatfield.
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